I watch the ripples change their size
But never leave the stream
Of warm impermanence
And so the days float through my eyes
But still the days seem the same
And these children that you spit on
As they try to change their worlds
Are immune to your consultations
They're quite aware of what they're goin' through
Wednesday, June 4, 2008
A History of Lightning
"Jedidiah Abraham had a history of lightning. "
Have his full name now, and a first line that doesn't suck so much.
4 comments:
And a worthy sentence it is.
Thanks Nathan. We try our best.
Write on.
I keep trying Camille.
Post a Comment