I watch the ripples change their size
But never leave the stream
Of warm impermanence
And so the days float through my eyes
But still the days seem the same
And these children that you spit on
As they try to change their worlds
Are immune to your consultations
They're quite aware of what they're goin' through
Tuesday, July 8, 2008
And then the Muse Giveth
After posting my "Defending the Muse" post, I then got another 850 words on "History of Lightning." Including a crucial piece of information.
Yay, and verily. It also crossed over some of what I had written already, but what was looking like five paragraphs of description, this handled in 15-20 words, and was a bit more powerful (as well as scene setting).
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Yay!
Yay, and verily. It also crossed over some of what I had written already, but what was looking like five paragraphs of description, this handled in 15-20 words, and was a bit more powerful (as well as scene setting).
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