What a field day for the heat
A thousand people in the street
Singing songs and carrying signs
Mostly saying, "hooray for our side"

Friday, August 12, 2011

Forward

Writing goal was modest this week. With Tuesday's fun I didn't think I would meet it. However, I did make it. Two chapters rewritten. The last chapter I worked on got a good restructuring. Action moved around a little, some information changed, characters hewed closer to their character instead of sounding the same. All in all, deleted about 600 words, but ended up over 400 words more than it was before (so about 1000 words for today).

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