I watch the ripples change their size
But never leave the stream
Of warm impermanence
And so the days float through my eyes
But still the days seem the same
And these children that you spit on
As they try to change their worlds
Are immune to your consultations
They're quite aware of what they're goin' through

Friday, September 16, 2011

#amwriting

Making some good progress. Finished going back through Chapter 24, Chapter 3, and Chapter 10 to add, rewrite, and clarify some things. Also went through Chapter 25. Updated WIPS. I think I'll make my second goal easily and will probably get close to 90,000 words when I'm all done. Still have more to do tonight, and then I'll have most of tomorrow to write.

I'm doing an internal Snoopy dance. This feels good.

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