Saturday, October 25, 2008

Lighting Strikes Twice

Rewrote/edited Lightning. It's now 4041 words, and I cut about 100 to 250 words out of the original, and changed a parcel load of the sentences around, mixed up paragraphs, and restructured the end.
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2 comments:

  1. Ken McConnellOct 25, 2008, 5:56:00 PM

    Your post title had me thinking you sold another story! ;)

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  2. Steve BuchheitOct 25, 2008, 7:09:00 PM

    Sorry Ken, didn't mean to mislead you, was just rifting on the story title and the fact that I didn't expect to rewrite/edit it this weekend.

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