There's battle lines being drawn.
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong.
Young people speaking their minds
getting so much resistance from behind
Saturday, October 25, 2008
Lighting Strikes Twice
Rewrote/edited Lightning. It's now 4041 words, and I cut about 100 to 250 words out of the original, and changed a parcel load of the sentences around, mixed up paragraphs, and restructured the end.
2 comments:
Your post title had me thinking you sold another story! ;)
Sorry Ken, didn't mean to mislead you, was just rifting on the story title and the fact that I didn't expect to rewrite/edit it this weekend.
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