I watch the ripples change their size
But never leave the stream
Of warm impermanence
And so the days float through my eyes
But still the days seem the same
And these children that you spit on
As they try to change their worlds
Are immune to your consultations
They're quite aware of what they're goin' through

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

WIP werx

Chapter 30 is out at about 1800 words. I don't have it formated yet, I'll update the side bar. I'll also have to change the end of Chapter 29 to make this fit. Also the first part of 31 came out at the same time. It still feels like I'm shoving crap, and I see much of what I need to fix in the rewrite, but I think I need to go forward before doing the major changes.

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