What a field day for the heat
A thousand people in the street
Singing songs and carrying signs
Mostly saying, "hooray for our side"

Saturday, June 23, 2012

Synopsis or teaser

Why does this rewrite of the synopsis of Bladesman keep feeling more like a teaser trailer than it does a plot synopsis? I either go into the "this happens, then this happens…" or the "In a world…" direction. I'm not sure either is the correct function. Sigh.

But I do think this one is a little better than the last one. Maybe if I sleep on it it'll seem better in the morning. For something less than 400 words, it shouldn't be this much trouble, should it?

In the end, I need to get it done to continue flogging the book and get back to writing the next one.

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