There's battle lines being drawn.
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong.
Young people speaking their minds
getting so much resistance from behind

Wednesday, August 13, 2008

Inspired by all the swimming

Rewrote "What the Sea Sends" from the notes I took at the poetry group reading. Tightened up the language, didn't do much, mostly single word edits. And then submitted to the good people over at Goblin Fruit.

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