There's battle lines being drawn.
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong.
Young people speaking their minds
getting so much resistance from behind

Thursday, January 8, 2009

Bone in the World

After a night filled with what seemed to be meaningless word substitution, I think I got "Scrimshaw Man" back in order. There were edits all over. I put in a word in the first stanza that I kept saying out loud when reading it. The second stanza is all new from the last time I submitted it, I think it's much stronger now. At least it's more concrete.

So after a quick search, it's off to Strange Horizons. We'll see how it does there. Good luck little poem. So that was what, two days?

Although I did skip writing a report for the Village. Oh well. I'll have to do it this weekend.

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