There's battle lines being drawn.
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong.
Young people speaking their minds
getting so much resistance from behind

Thursday, December 18, 2008

Delicate Sound of Thunder

Just finished another full run through. Cleared up some language, added in the two words (and a few more along the way). We're down to 4369. So another 152 words go to the big bit-bucket in the sky (and that's an eight bit bucket by the way).

It's starting to have that "dead fish" feel about it, which means I'm close to the end with it.

I have a few thirty thousand words to read and critique before Sunday, and a house to help clean up, so I'm probably not going to get back to it any time soon. But it needs to go in the mail next week.

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