There's battle lines being drawn.
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong.
Young people speaking their minds
getting so much resistance from behind

Sunday, December 14, 2008

The week starts early tomorrow...

... so it's off to bed. I got through the entire story, adding in and making the small edits. We're at 4768 words, and there's one piece I just left at notes (explain how Jedd had to kill to get body). That might add 20 or so words.

I need to edit it back down, and rewrite for clarity in some places. I think I need to delete some, but I'm figuring I'll end up at 4250-4500 words. A little longer than when I started and what I wanted, but it does make a stronger tale (although my opener isn't as strong anymore, but I solved for POV).

Time for bed.

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